







Strangely I usually like my initial comps best, this is not an exception.








 Here is my revision:
Here is my revision: OK so I know mine isn't perfect and people may think I had it easy since the original was so atrocious but truth is that made it even harder.  I had to try and decipher the information through layers of bad color and confusing info.  It was akin to translating and I had to really examine it to get all the buried info.  The color was the hardest part since it had to convey meaning while staying clear.  In the end this was the one that printed best, however it is not the easiest to read on screen.  This was quite the learning experience for me and I figured out how to use tools in Adobe Illustrator that i had never used before.  I ended up re-drawing the whole thing and working on it as multiple different maps for the different sets of information and then combining them and working on it more.
OK so I know mine isn't perfect and people may think I had it easy since the original was so atrocious but truth is that made it even harder.  I had to try and decipher the information through layers of bad color and confusing info.  It was akin to translating and I had to really examine it to get all the buried info.  The color was the hardest part since it had to convey meaning while staying clear.  In the end this was the one that printed best, however it is not the easiest to read on screen.  This was quite the learning experience for me and I figured out how to use tools in Adobe Illustrator that i had never used before.  I ended up re-drawing the whole thing and working on it as multiple different maps for the different sets of information and then combining them and working on it more.

 
 This image is of the moon's dark side, the colors correlate to geological materials and phenomena and is part of a series produced by United States Geological Survey in partnership with NASA between 1971 and 1998. I got it from a blog on the WIRED SCIENCE blog network, here is the link:
This image is of the moon's dark side, the colors correlate to geological materials and phenomena and is part of a series produced by United States Geological Survey in partnership with NASA between 1971 and 1998. I got it from a blog on the WIRED SCIENCE blog network, here is the link: This is from NASA's site, it is an image of satellites and debris in the earth's orbit.  Here is the description given; "The debris objects shown in the images are an artist's impression based on actual density data. However, the debris objects are shown at an exaggerated size to make them visible at the scale shown."
This is from NASA's site, it is an image of satellites and debris in the earth's orbit.  Here is the description given; "The debris objects shown in the images are an artist's impression based on actual density data. However, the debris objects are shown at an exaggerated size to make them visible at the scale shown."
 Though I am not at all certain whether this contains actual information or if it is a farce and a sham, the content made me giggle nonetheless. I mean what important information to communicate and I assume one would be able to reach a completely new and different demographic with that information and thus help fight global warming.
Though I am not at all certain whether this contains actual information or if it is a farce and a sham, the content made me giggle nonetheless. I mean what important information to communicate and I assume one would be able to reach a completely new and different demographic with that information and thus help fight global warming. 





 
